A decade after initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program, California has seen annual per capita consumption of cigarettes decline from over 125 packs per person to about 60, more than twice as great as that in the nation as a whole.
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veravane 2015-11-06 13:58:39
ｔｈａｔ 无所指 ｐｅｒ ｃａｐｉｔａ与ｐｅｒ ｐｅｒｓｏｎ 重复
小揪揪 2016-12-20 22:34:07
因为这里后面有个ｔｈａｔ 如果这个选项的话后面ｔｈａｔ无所指 Ｄ
leahliulliu1 2016-11-16 15:43:52
per capita和per person重复
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-20 16:58:20
The problem with E is not the placement of "annual", but the failure to include a word like "drop". The modifier (the part after the comma) is "more than twice as great as that". But what is more than twice as great as what? It is not the number of packs which is more than twice as great, but the drop in the number of packs. Because this is not stated in E, it is wrong.
das123456 2016-12-09 21:49:48
The problem with E is not the placement of "annual", but the failure to include a word like "drop". The modifier (the part after the comma) is "more than twice as great as that". But what is more than twice as great as what? It is not the number of packs which is more than twice as great, but the drop in the number of packs. Because this is not stated in E, it is wrong.
das123456 2016-12-09 21:46:21
相較於正確選項D直接用同位語a drop清楚表明指的是「下降幅度」，E選項的句尾形容詞比較結構有兩個指向的可能，所以是相對有歧義而被刪去。
小揪揪 2016-12-09 09:37:08
more than结构不符合同位语构成; per capita和per person重复; 改变了原意“人均吸烟量每年下降……”，而E是“年人均吸烟量下降……” 这里是drop more than，不是60
sasazz 2016-11-10 12:37:00
没有先行词drop，more than变成就近修饰the actual consumption rate of 60 packs per person, 而不是下降的数量drop；而且后面的代词也没有指代的对象。
aislynnxx 2016-10-16 12:43:14
per capita 和 per person 重复
aislynnxx 2016-10-16 12:43:12
per capita 和 per person 重复
ColdSheldon 2016-10-07 21:08:41
这里应该是用同位语 真心看不出来
