A decade after initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program, per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs annually per person to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as in the nation as a whole.
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小梨涡Shella 2016-04-11 11:40:15
initiating的主语应为California
想去法國的小周 2015-09-13 09:12:16
A/B/C 句子前后的逻辑主语要一致。前面initiate的逻辑主语是Canifonia而不是consumption E per capita consumption与后面的 125 packs per person重复了 D a drop 是 decline的同位语
lzclzc 2016-07-29 18:36:23
drop和drop比
Henryhao 2016-11-18 19:52:56
前面的initiating表达的逻辑主语是California，所以主句主语错误。
CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-10 17:15:18
more than twice as great as 是用法是正确的。more than除了可以表比较，也可以表示程度更深，这里就是表示比twice的两倍还多。as great as 后面省略了宾语the drop. 真正的错误点在于per capita与per person重复。
张三0925 2016-08-11 16:42:47
initiating的逻辑主语不应该是consumption，a drop 和 in the nation不平行比较
ypheroin 2015-12-28 10:18:23
1. initiating 逻辑主语问题 2. a drop vs in the nations，对比不平行
yiran32069 2015-09-23 09:58:52
per capita和per person 意思重复
valora0909 2014-10-07 18:18:32
initiating的逻辑主语应该是California; a drop more than twice as great as in the nation比较双方不对等,应该改为 that in the nation, that代替a drop
JellyC 2014-08-10 15:23:15
这里未划线部分句子有initiating，即时分词短语开头，因此主句的主语要能执行initiate这个动作。怎么就没考虑到这个了呢，，，不应该啊。。哭
