A decade after initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program, annual per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs to about 60, more than twice as great as that in the nation as a whole.
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aislynnxx 2016-10-16 12:43:54
initiating需要逻辑主语
ztg591 2016-07-24 20:01:47
无头句看逗号后主语，consumption 非逻辑主语 同位语。如果不加drop直接逗号more than，那么比较的就是数为60的C的消耗量和全国的消耗量，但是之前句意有说它下降了很多，怎么可能还会比全国的消耗量多两倍呢，中间也没有任何的转折词，很明显逻辑有问题。
Cheriez 2015-08-31 11:12:08
this sentence starts with a 'headless modifier' (headless in the sense that it doesn't have a subject). in sentences starting with such modifiers, the modifier MUST modify the noun immediately following the comma. so, choice b implies that 'per-capita consumption of cigarettes' initiated the nation's most comprehensive antismoking program (clearly an absurdity). choice d, by contrast, correctly states that california initiated the program. notice that the same consideration also eliminates choice a (which states that consumption initiated the program) and choice c (which states that CA's consumption initiated the program).
leemodest 2017-01-01 20:22:06
在more than 里， than 应该加的是比较对象：in the nation.或 B does。
leemodest 2017-01-01 19:49:09
a decade after 修饰 initiating，initiating 逻辑主语
励志yy 2016-11-06 21:00:04
注意initiating需要逻辑主语，more than前面加上a drop 才能构成同位语
CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-10 17:16:19
句尾不加限定性同位语就变成了一个比宾语的结构。
xx2312345X 2016-05-19 16:45:18
两点： 1.（A decade after） initiating the nation's most，前面加了一节，又忘了 initiating要看逻辑主语了！ 2.more than twice as great as that in the nation as a whole.应该是同为结构，但是要加上a drop这个noun才行
kristy16s 2016-05-19 08:59:32
annual per capita consumption of cigarettes 作为initiating的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑; more than twice as great as that不符合同位语构成方式,应该补上 a drop对前面的现象进行概括。能把A decade看成 a decline我看你也是中暑了把
siasiasia 2016-04-14 15:31:58
more than变成修饰60了，逻辑意思错误。
r1239312358 2016-02-27 15:46:08
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