A decade after initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program, California has seen per capita consumption of cigarettes decline from over 125 packs annually to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as that in the nation as a whole.
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小灰灰 2014-04-06 15:47:55
California才能做initiating的逻辑主语，所以主句的主语一定是California。比较双方对等，a drop more than twice as great as that in the nation，that指代a drop，a drop 做同位语说明decline后面的内容
katieeeeee 2014-12-09 18:47:30
LP 同位语
xx2312345X 2016-05-23 20:19:06
（A decade after） initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program 远了又看不见了
托福文森特 2017-01-05 16:28:22
initiating 逻辑主语 逻辑主语 逻辑主语，太久不做都忘记了！！！！
papadoudou 2016-12-02 17:46:32
initiate的主语不能是consumption
sasazz 2016-11-10 12:45:12
主句的动词是have seen，它也是唯一有时态的动词；RON举例子：I watched Sally go into the building，这里watch是唯一有时态的动词。我个人觉得drop在这里作have seen的宾语的同位语。
Hellosaaama 2016-10-24 16:58:37
California是initiate的主语
CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-05 16:07:10
more than相当于是twice的一个修饰成分。
CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-05 16:04:56
A drop是一个概括性的同位语从句。
huiminzi1124 2016-06-15 18:29:35
考点: 逻辑表达(Logical Predication) 比较(Comparision) 1) 逻辑主语 2) 比较双方要对等 (A) per capita consumption of cigarettes 作为initiating的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑; a drop more than twice as great as in the nation比较双方不对等,应该改为 that in the nation, that代替a drop, 构成对等的比较 (B) annual per capita consumption of cigarettes 作为initiating的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑; more than twice as great as that不符合同位语构成方式,应该补上 a drop对前面的现象进行概括 (C) California's annual per capita consumption作为initiating的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑; more than结构不符合同位语构成 (D) 正确, California作为initiating的逻辑主语,符合逻辑; a drop…结构符合同位语构成; that代替a drop使得比较双方对等 (E) more than结构不符合同位语构成; per capita和per person重复; 改变了原意“人均吸烟量每年下降……”，而E是“年人均吸烟量下降……” 句子结构: … after initiating…, California has seen…capita consumption…decline from.. to…, a drop…
LM檬先森。 2016-05-29 22:35:10
(D) 正确, California作为initiating的逻辑主语,符合逻辑; a drop…结构符合同位语构成; that代替a drop使得比较双方对等
kristy16s 2016-05-28 08:05:41
人均 per capita
kristy16s 2016-05-28 08:05:40
人均 per capita
