A decade after initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program, California's annual per capita consumption of cigarettes declined from over 125 packs per person to about 60, more than twice as great as the drop in the nation as a whole.
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Ada不要卷儿 2015-04-17 05:35:07
per capita and per person 重复
马修斯嚓G 2013-11-03 03:27:42
per capita 与 per person 有重复，对比不平衡！
sailsweek 2014-04-25 17:34:27
per person重复，前面已经说了annual per capita consumption
LM檬先森。 2016-05-29 22:34:47
(C) California's annual per capita consumption作为initiating的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑; more than结构不符合同位语构成
Ivycoco 2016-03-22 11:06:48
per capita 与 per person 有重复
Sparrow_7 2016-03-18 22:25:06
主语不对，应是California
lisasasali 2015-12-28 22:04:17
per person重复，前面已经说了annual per capita consumption
