The first trenches cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence of centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arising simultaneously but also independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.
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JellyC 2014-08-07 12:56:08
simultaneously with，independently of这两个副词（或其形容词形式）所搭配的介词是不一样的，因此simultaneously后面的介词在这题里不能省略
sue95 2017-02-18 00:19:04
Bd trenches yields主谓不一致
Glamorbree 2015-01-25 23:57:53
evidence for 应该是 evidence that
SuperFreDWWW 2016-10-07 11:45:04
evidence往后一长串既无标点符号也没有从句，很可能导致语义表达不清楚。arising有修饰Middle East的嫌疑；but链接两个副词，因此共用前后成分（主语和宾语，甚至可能包括介词），但无论如何翻译后半句都是语义混乱。
chrisding123 2016-07-07 13:58:11
yields(trenches) 错了；but also 也错了
annie654 2016-05-11 16:10:06
cut---cut的done形式，可以就是trenches；yields主谓一致次，；but also错
杀鸡的熊 2016-04-05 14:49:14
主语 trenches和yields不一致
huhuhudandan 2015-11-06 08:55:27
but是转折，but also递进，不符. simultaneously with 与independently of 对应。
CAOSIJIA 2015-10-13 20:23:20
yields单复数跟主语不一致，also多余
Heyiii 2015-09-11 10:10:05
also 没有意义；yields 改为 yield，主语为trenches。
lanyuer 2015-09-10 18:47:03
simultaneous(ly) with independent(ly) of
lanyuer 2015-09-10 18:40:51
evidence后面接that，然后后面就成了从句，就应该用动词arouse了
