The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously with but also independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.
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小灰灰 2014-03-30 10:32:47
that were cut不如直接done做后置定语简洁；yields错，主谓一致trenches对应yield；were arising时态不对，应该是过去时；but是转折，but also递进，根据语义simutaneously with与independently of相反，所以but also使用错误；yield用现在完成时才合理。
Sissi0527 2016-05-30 06:10:30
当定语从句只是be adj.形式时（that are cut）经常可以直接换用形容词来表达，可作为快速kill选项的依据。 that were cut不如cut简洁
图法法图a 2016-12-04 21:50:39
1.主谓不一致，trenches 是复数
sue95 2017-02-18 00:18:47
Bd trenches yields主谓不一致
丁小铁 2016-12-20 10:32:26
the first trenches yields 错误
das123456 2016-12-04 20:58:21
S-V dont agree. The trenches ... yields
SuperFreDWWW 2016-10-07 11:36:21
but also没有和not only搭配。 且but also表示的是递进关系，这里要表示的是转折关系。
chrisding123 2016-07-07 14:03:09
yields错了
annie654 2016-05-11 16:05:03
that were cut不如直接done做后置定语简洁；yields错，主谓一致trenches对应yield；were arising时态不对，应该是过去时；but是转折，but also递进，根据语义simutaneously with与independently of相反，所以but also使用错误；yield用现在完成时才合理。
jessicachow 2016-01-17 16:32:32
yields和逻辑主语 the first trenches单复数不符。
Estaaa 2015-11-12 10:34:50
that were cut不如直接done做后置定语简洁；yields错，主谓一致trenches对应yield；were arising时态不对，应该是过去时；but是转折，but also递进，根据语义simutaneously with与independently of相反，所以but also使用错误；yield用现在完成时才合理。
