Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again.
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hoper 2016-04-22 21:34:41
in a 1991 report错误地修饰了moderate alcohol consumption，好像consumption是发生在report里；in particular red wine无法修饰alcohol consumption，概念不同；link to搭配错误；start的主语是risk错误；start them中的them指代不清。
香蕉小姐 2015-05-03 16:45:32
in a 1991 report介词短语修饰有问题，这里的意思是报告中的consumption。
hetatomato 2015-05-18 12:23:29
1.link to是错误用法，应该为link with 2.them指代不清 3.red wine 和alcohol consumption不平行，应该为red wine consumption
sue95 2017-02-15 01:55:26
E a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine 后面部分也是report一部分 意思变成风险减少导致结果，应该涵盖联系
sss要上港中文a 2016-09-12 08:58:44
in a 1991 report修饰歧义
Ines要上700 2016-06-28 21:38:49
句子顺序乱七八糟 them指代错误
ypheroin 2016-01-18 16:31:15
补充： risk vs started 主谓不合逻辑。them 指代sales 离太远
ypheroin 2016-01-18 16:29:57
in a 1991 report 的位置产生了是修饰moderate alcohol consumption 而不是link
庞呵呵 2015-08-18 23:38:28
¥错选¥。 E. in a 1991 report错误地修饰了moderate alcohol consumption，好像consumption是发生在report里；in particular red wine无法修饰alcohol consumption，概念不同；link to搭配错误；start的主语是risk错误；start them中的them指代不清。
moneysharon 2015-08-14 10:20:47
1.link to是错误用法，应该为link with 2.them指代不清 3.red wine 和alcohol consumption不平行，应该为red wine consumption
gloria熊 2015-05-16 15:45:51
link..with..固定搭配！ start的主语是risk，逻辑错误！
