Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again.
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Leon111 2014-06-09 16:14:33
B. red wine与alcohol consumption概念不同，不能同位修饰，应该在red wine后面也补上consumption；they离其所指代的slaes太远，使得句子理解起来不清晰，awkward；link A with B，A和B谁在前并不要紧。
lillian4cat 2014-09-03 04:45:33
red wine与alcohol consumption概念不同，不能同位修饰，应该在red wine后面也补上consumption；they离其所指代的slaes太远，使得句子理解起来不清晰，awkward；link A with B，A和B谁在前并不要紧。
wc790 2015-09-16 21:31:51
consumption 和 red wine不对应，they指代不清（指代consumption/sales)
sue95 2017-02-15 01:54:16
B a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine,变成同位语啦,不能相互解释
das123456 2016-12-05 18:19:53
red wine不是consumption的一種
sligar 2016-11-29 00:51:53
red wine与alcohol consumption概念不同，不能同位修饰，应该在red wine后面也补上consumption；they离其所指代的slaes太远，使得句子理解起来不清晰，awkwar
froyo 2016-10-11 21:25:35
particularly of red wine 否则有歧义。这个之前没看出来 而且they 离得太远了。
前程万里两不相干 2016-10-10 22:50:21
but after the report that linked a reduce disease with a consumption, red wine, they began growing again red wine 作consumption 的同位语，错误
前程万里两不相干 2016-10-10 01:10:53
particularly red wine 没有and， 这个成分变成直接修饰consumption 的同位语
sasazz 2016-09-25 20:47:38
BDE项都把moderate alcohol consumption和red wine当成一类东西了
meiyouyhm 2016-09-23 18:43:14
“consumption, particularly red wine‘’，Particularly red wine cannot describe consumption—the preposition of is needed; the placement of they so far from the position of the antecedent Sales makes the sentence awkward and difficult to decode.
sss要上港中文a 2016-09-12 08:59:17
particularly OF red wine D也是一样错误
fantasticW 2016-08-05 23:01:04
B. red wine与alcohol consumption概念不同，不能同位修饰，应该在red wine后面也补上consumption；they离其所指代的slaes太远，使得句子理解起来不清晰，awkward；link A with B，A和B谁在前并不要紧。
