Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again.
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wc790 2015-09-16 21:35:57
consumption 和 particularly（consumption) of red wine 不对应，应该是 consumption of alcohol, particularly of red wine；which错误指代consumption；them指代不清晰
carson7 2014-07-20 09:52:35
which修饰有问题
hoper 2016-04-22 21:27:56
which指代的是red wine，错误；particularly of red wine与moderate alcohol consumption不平行，后者应改为moderate consumption of alcohol；cause的主语是consumption，逻辑意思很荒谬，正确的主语应该是report。
sue95 2017-02-15 01:54:54
C moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine不平行
vennie 2016-03-20 09:36:34
which 指代red wine
ypheroin 2016-01-18 16:26:57
and of red wine vs alcohol consumption.
lyf0420 2015-11-29 09:30:21
语法--which指代的是red wine，错误；particularly of red wine与moderate alcohol consumption不平行，后者应改为moderate consumption of alcohol；cause的主语是consumption，逻辑意思很荒谬，正确的主语应该是report。
yiran32069 2015-09-17 16:01:31
and 前后不平行
SC430 2015-08-22 14:04:22
consumption 和 red wine不平行
庞呵呵 2015-08-18 23:36:41
C. which指代的是red wine，错误；particularly of red wine与moderate alcohol consumption不平行，后者应改为moderate consumption of alcohol；cause的主语是consumption，逻辑意思很荒谬，正确的主语应该是report。
moneysharon 2015-08-14 10:17:26
them是主语，应该用they的形式
