Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.
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ypheroin 2016-01-18 16:25:17
补充：and particularly (consumption) of red wine. 平行清楚，没有问题。
hoper 2016-04-22 21:25:33
题目释义：Sales declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked A, …,with B. 考点 代词指代（reference）平行结构（parallelism）逻辑意思（Logical predication） link…with…固定搭配 代词若离其所指代对象太远，则会造成指代不清的情况。 选项分析 A. correct；They是完全指代，指代sales of wines。and particularly of red wine中去掉and也是对的(and可放在插入语前，不影响逻辑—lcy19812000)；begin to do或begin doing都正确；in particular在本题不如particularly有效，因为介词太多句式会复杂。
lok19600618 2014-05-10 21:06:17
这种换下顺序的题，实在没什么办法，就选主谓语出现早的
sue95 2017-02-15 01:53:36
A 相同名词时可以省的，但注意介词别省
ColdSheldon 2016-10-18 15:07:14
做题的时候 纠结于and 这里没有与之平行的对象 这是M书上所提过的一个例外 Another obvious exception is a sentence in which the and precedes the last element in a list of at least three elements. A less obvious exception is a sentence like the one below, in which the comma before the and marks a pause and is necessary to prevent the reader from treating fixed and crashed as parallel. 所以起的是一个 防止误认为平行的作用
sss要上港中文a 2016-09-12 08:55:07
此题注意看解析，讲的很详细，收获大大的！ and particularly of red wine正确！(and可放在插入语前） (and)particularly of red wine均可！
fantasticW 2016-08-05 23:01:53
补充：and particularly (consumption) of red wine. 平行清楚，没有问题。
VincyYoung 2016-07-27 20:42:54
they指代sales; moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine平行结构
karenning 2016-07-04 23:06:39
- consumption of alcohol, and particularly (consumption of) red wine
稳定的玉米投手 2016-06-14 09:52:24
注意"particularly of red wine"是和 “of alcohol”构成平行的结构的，加and没错
gjf1995315 2016-06-03 15:22:11
of alcohol 和of red wine是并列的
deserveee 2016-03-27 17:48:17
注意"particularly of red wine"是和 “of alcohol”构成平行的结构的，加and没错
