Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again.
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Egoyiyy 2016-03-07 16:33:42
代词they指代对象sales太远； with表伴随，reduced risk伴随着they began growing again不是很好，red wine 和alcohol consumption不对等，in particular在这里一个词组表尤其，特别
piupiu雨雨 2014-11-05 15:58:25
consumption of red wine
piupiu雨雨 2014-11-05 15:58:26
consumption of red wine
sue95 2017-02-15 01:55:09
D 同位语结构错误相同
hoper 2016-04-22 21:33:55
with独立主格的核心名词是a reduced risk of heart disease risk，用它来伴随they began growing意思上很荒谬；red wine不能修饰alcohol consumption，要在red wine前面加上of；they began growing中的they离其指代对象sales过远。
yceric10 2016-04-11 19:38:16
they began growing again with a reduced risk of heart disease 意思？
hiafami 2016-04-01 12:39:59
代词they指代对象sales太远； with表伴随，reduced risk伴随着they began growing again不是很好，red wine 和alcohol consumption不对等，in particular在这里一个词组表尤其，特别
veravane 2015-10-11 18:09:53
with独立主格的核心名词是a reduced risk of heart disease risk，用它来伴随they began growing意思上很荒谬；red wine不能修饰alcohol consumption，要在red wine前面加上of；they began growing中的they离其指代对象sales过远
morl 2015-09-29 19:03:36
错了好几次！！！
wc790 2015-09-16 21:38:16
linked in a report with alcohol consumption 对象错误；consumption 和 red wine 不对应； they指代不清
蓝色海豚湾 2015-09-03 20:33:45
D变成了它们销量提升， with a risk with后面如果是解释，应该接with a reduction of risk 不能with a reduced risk 依然是事物重心问题 重心是减少，重心不是风险
蓝色海豚湾 2015-09-03 20:33:44
D变成了它们销量提升， with a risk with后面如果是解释，应该接with a reduction of risk 不能with a reduced risk 依然是事物重心问题 重心是减少，重心不是风险
