The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group collectively known as the subprime lending market.
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shisu0610041 2016-12-24 17:00:01
前句中并没有出现group,因此such的使用错误
veravane 2015-11-08 20:45:31
records of 为固定搭配 such 多余
荔馨 2015-10-10 07:36:18
(d) and (e) are unidiomatic; you can't write "proven records that they... if you substitute "such a group" for "a group", then that's incorrect, because "such" wouldn't be referring to anything.前面没有提到 such 因此在这里such 多余
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-21 19:30:15
ok, here's more specifically how it works: "such an X" only makes sense when the concept of "X" could theoretically encompass many possibilities, of which "such an X" is only one. i.e., if you have already given the exact, unique definition of X, then "such an X" makes no sense. e.g. i have no problem with using a standard geometry textbook; indeed, such a book is helpful in providing ready-made sets of practice problems. CORRECT --> this makes sense, because there isn't just one standard geometry textbook. so, there are many items fitting that description; "such a book" stands for any one such item. but... fewer churches than ever before are using readings from the King James Bible, because the archaic language in such a book is difficult for many parishioners to understand. INCORRECT --> The King James Bible is a unique book; it does not represent a broader class of possibilities from which we might choose one to use as an example. so, this doesn't make sense. in contexts like this one, you could use something like "this/that book" -- or you could use an appropriate modifier, as in the correct answer to the problem in this thread.
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-21 19:28:14
if you substitute "such a group" for "a group", then that's incorrect, because "such" wouldn't be referring to anything.
shisu0610041 2016-09-20 19:14:23
前句中并没有出现group,因此such的使用错误 (d) and (e) are unidiomatic; you can't write "proven records that they..."
monster怪獸 2016-03-21 15:05:13
1)proven record良好的记录 2)record of sth固定搭配优于record that…… 3)with引导独立主格，其主语应当与主句的逻辑主语一致
Egoyiyy 2016-03-17 10:58:08
as long as you mention some specific "X" earlier in the sentence, then "such an X" is fine, yes. another example: i have no problem with using a standard geometry textbook; indeed, such a book is helpful in providing ready-made sets of practice problems. --> "such a book" is legitimate because the sentence
xiaobaitu 2016-02-18 15:25:34
；such无所指，错误且多余
lyf0420 2015-12-02 09:36:35
语法--前句中并没有出现group,因此such的使用错误
jhb999 2015-10-13 14:53:51
Proven records：良好记录 Records of sth. 固定搭配，比records that简洁地道 ； such 没有指代的东西
