The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of not paying back their loans on time, a group collectively known as the subprime lending market.
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vickiaro 2015-11-16 11:19:42
1）Proven records：良好记录 2）Records of sth. 固定搭配，比records that简洁地道。所以这里不用that从句。 3）这里a group是做前面borrowers的同位语，如果用such a group，such在这里无指代。如果将a group去掉，那么known的逻辑主语则是the loan company，意思不对。
jessie_yanhui 2015-09-27 15:03:19
逻辑意义相同时，优先选分词而非从句
CyndiaLee 2015-04-13 18:21:27
a group 重点在同位语 '''' 'ving动作发出者不清晰 '''' records of
allenzeng 2016-04-13 07:22:44
1.record of 固定搭配，比record that好；2.a group做同位语修饰borrowers，如果直接接known则修饰loans，寓意错误。
allenzeng 2016-04-13 07:22:44
1.record of 固定搭配，比record that好；2.a group做同位语修饰borrowers，如果直接接known则修饰loans，寓意错误。
jhb999 2015-10-13 14:53:16
a group 是同位语，borrowers
SharonUSA 2015-09-24 09:27:32
题目意思：“银行声明不久后它就可以向那些有不良记录的人放贷了” 正选：本题关键在于识别出逗号后面成分的修饰对象 -- borrowers的同位语必须是a group才合理 错Dthat they do not pay back their loans on time, Ron: (d) and (e) are unidiomatic; you can't write "proven records that they..." 另一个硬伤：选了D，后面的“ collectively known as the subprime lending market.”错误修饰time/loan
潮状呼吸 2014-08-28 18:15:30
a group 做同位语正好
cechymery 2014-07-27 16:21:51
records of比records that地道简洁，但是indicate, expect。。。用that比较好
