The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group collectively known as the subprime lending market.
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Ellen1889 2014-07-30 16:30:28
With引导独立主格，其逻辑主语应为主句主语，逻辑不合理；such无所指，错误且多余
眞白 2016-03-24 20:32:39
such这个词用于，前面已经提及了X，之后又说这个X怎么了，这时可以用SUCH X
Monicca 2016-11-23 16:54:17
with独立主格结构，主语是主句主语，
charlene123456 2015-10-14 21:53:35
with 主语变成了company, 应该是 borrowers, such 无所指，多余
liqijie3242656 2014-07-28 14:49:54
with独立主格修饰的是主句主语，不和逻辑
Deprofundis 2014-07-04 21:34:07
独立主格做状语修饰主谓宾结构，这里修饰announce错误
