The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records that they do not pay back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
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CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-14 11:37:33
known 修饰最近的名词，即是loan， 修饰不到borrowers。
xiaobaitu 2016-02-18 15:25:24
(d) and (e) are unidiomatic; you can't write "proven records that they..." Proven records：良好记录3) Records of sth. 固定搭配，比records that简洁地道。未划线部分的known修饰loans不合理
IAMBACK 2016-06-03 11:20:54
(d) and (e) are unidiomatic; you can't write "proven records that they..." as long as you mention some specific "X" earlier in the sentence, then "such an X" is fine, yes.
liqijie3242656 2014-07-28 14:48:16
定于从句在这里不简洁，known修饰time不合逻辑
