Even with her career having been cut short when she was in her prime, and the fifteen recordings she made were disappointing artistically as well as technically, Olive Fremstad (1871-1951) has never been entirely forgotten by opera aficionados.
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海蓝新雨 2015-07-25 16:18:52
and前后不平行
marcusly17 2014-10-17 20:34:00
如果使用even with开头，则句子应该为even with A and B, Olive has never been forgotten或者even with A, and with B, Olive has never been forgotten，且A/B应该为结构和逻辑含义两个层面上均平行对等的词/词组，这样，才满足句子“层次间关系清晰，层次内平行对称”的要求。D选项中and the 15 recordings部分是个完整独立的句子，因为是个句子，所以无法和前面的even with her career建立平行关系，又无法直接与主句部分建立从句关系，破坏了整个句子的结构。
piratening 2014-12-16 12:50:40
even with／／／／and with／／／
chengyuyuan 2014-07-30 14:27:26
D. 如果使用even with开头，则句子应该为even with A and B, Olive has never been forgotten或者even with A, and with B, Olive has never been forgotten，且A/B应该为结构和逻辑含义两个层面上均平行对等的词/词组，这样，才满足句子“层次间关系清晰，层次内平行对称”的要求。D选项中and the 15 recordings部分是个完整独立的句子，因为是个句子，所以无法和前面的even with her career建立平行关系，又无法直接与主句部分建立从句关系，破坏了整个句子的结构。
chengyuyuan 2014-07-30 14:27:26
D. 如果使用even with开头，则句子应该为even with A and B, Olive has never been forgotten或者even with A, and with B, Olive has never been forgotten，且A/B应该为结构和逻辑含义两个层面上均平行对等的词/词组，这样，才满足句子“层次间关系清晰，层次内平行对称”的要求。D选项中and the 15 recordings部分是个完整独立的句子，因为是个句子，所以无法和前面的even with her career建立平行关系，又无法直接与主句部分建立从句关系，破坏了整个句子的结构。
