Even as her career had been cut short when she was in her prime, with the fifteen recordings she had made disappointing artistically as well as technically, Olive Fremstad (1871-1951) has never been entirely forgotten by opera aficionados.
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海蓝新雨 2015-07-25 16:18:08
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BobZ 2015-12-17 23:56:07
过去完成时had been cut short使用不正确，was cut short与was in her prime逻辑上是同一个时间点，时态应该一致;with引起的错误同B
ypheroin 2016-01-15 18:29:47
even as = 正巧在……的时候，没有让步。
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-24 21:21:23
* 'even as' suggests that the two things being describe d (the cutting short of her career and her not being forgotten by opera aficionados) are contemporaneous events, an idea that doesn't make any sense.
