Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man—eater of the movies-less than those killed by bee stings.
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773 2014-05-11 11:36:42
words below from Ron@http://www.manhattangmat.com you can't use parallel constructions with "those"/"that"/etc, in separate clauses, unless they are EXACTLY PARALLEL to whatever shows up in the other part. in this case: you can't write "those killed by bee stings" unless the other part contains "people killed by the great white shark" (with NOTHING IN BETWEEN). it doesn't, so you can't.
Crycie 2014-08-23 10:33:14
the number of people killed by the GWS is compared to people killed by bee stings, which is illogical. bad comparison.
Echodos 2015-05-07 23:41:19
less是单数也就是说是数字的比较，而those却是people，比较对象不对等，错误
ColdSheldon 2016-10-11 17:24:04
这里用those 是没有道理的 you can't use parallel constructions with "those"/"that"/etc, in separate clauses, unless they are EXACTLY PARALLEL to whatever shows up in the other part. 只有真的出现会重复出现的词/词组 才可以为了简洁把他们用that those 指代。
snow199511 2016-06-13 15:51:07
简化句式：Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, less than those .killed by the bee stings 1. less 2. those 与前面不平行
ypheroin 2016-01-11 19:14:23
1. less 错误，people在这里是可数名词
ZoeyYu 2015-11-12 20:45:13
less错误。those指代people，比较对象没有问题，但是比较结构上却不平行，前面用的是主谓结构，people是主语，been killed是谓语，后面虽然比较词people正确，可却没有用谓语的形式。
veravane 2015-10-15 09:31:22
比较级的结构不平行
彩色的你 2015-09-22 18:02:25
less修饰不可数man可数
zheng911 2014-12-31 23:33:00
in the choice with "those killed by bee stings" -- note that we don't have "people killed by the great white shark" in the other part.
zhaoqingyu6 2014-10-24 20:12:39
the man-eater in the movies 使用来修饰 the great white shark 的 fewer than those have been killed by bee sting 和前面有平行结构 所以选b
潮状呼吸 2014-08-29 11:41:35
只有AB有破折号其他都排除，A中less形容people不恰当。。
