As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting, one of the most influential artists in the American theater, Stella Adler, trained several generations of actors whose ranks included Marlon Brando and Robert De Niro.
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DorothyDu 2014-03-21 20:29:31
GMAT语法里说主语谓语出现不能太慢。SA前面出现用逗号隔开的修饰语太多。subject have modifier preceded and followed it which is awkward。
Rubymaking 2014-04-07 18:49:28
主语出来之前有两组修饰语a和b，这不好，因为有歧义，你不能想当然认为他们都必须修饰主语，也可以是b修饰主语，a修饰b
jyxoo 2015-01-20 23:50:34
改变句子重心，train从定语变成谓语。
francescao 2016-09-07 20:44:05
没有 谓语
lovehideto 2016-07-22 03:43:10
主语出现的太慢前面修饰语太多。
snow199511 2016-06-05 21:09:06
as an actress。。这句话直接修饰主语，所以主语直接用stella更好
oopsjanice 2016-05-05 16:59:25
主语出现的太慢前面修饰语太多
一只小花卷 2016-04-14 14:55:18
one of 之前应当加上连接词 注意尾巴长得跟正确选项一样，是GMAT别有用心，应当留意
mszzzz 2016-04-10 01:39:42
Too many modifiers before the subject.
FreyaDoubles 2016-03-06 18:25:26
主谓出现太慢
加一 2016-02-18 09:02:27
两段修饰语连用，修饰不清
phyllis126 2016-01-08 12:15:14
人名前面的修饰太多，而且one of the most influential artists这里没有谓语或者介词
ypheroin 2015-11-30 15:37:03
one of the most 可能是在修饰a teacher of acting,等，而且三个修饰部分显得头重脚轻。
