As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting, one of the most influential artists in the American theater was Stella Adler, who trained several generations of actors including Marlon Brando and Robert De Niro.
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一只小花卷 2016-04-14 14:53:24
此句主语为one of the most influential artists，则As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting 也是修饰该主语，与直接将Stella Adler做主语相比，清晰度显著降低，为次优。
DorothyDu 2014-03-21 20:28:12
它这个感觉就不对。one of .... was .... 这样也对，可是前面有了modifiers了啊，俩as呢
jyxoo 2015-01-20 23:49:30
重心错误，who 指代不明
要拿第一名的神鱼 2017-01-17 18:05:02
as an actress 是修饰后面的逻辑主语，所以出现在comma后面的应该是SA而不是one of...
兔不恬 2016-11-13 18:18:42
主语不对
francescao 2016-09-07 20:44:49
主语怎么回事？？？
lovehideto 2016-07-22 03:41:19
主语变成one of the artists was SA.用SA直接做主语更好。
snow199511 2016-06-05 21:08:23
as an actress。。这句话直接修饰主语，所以主语直接用stella更好
oopsjanice 2016-05-05 16:57:21
as an actress。。这句话直接修饰主语，所以主语直接用stella更好
JaneWon 2016-04-15 23:42:40
wordy, 但句子本身是没有问题的
mszzzz 2016-04-10 01:36:27
The core subject of the sentence is "one of the most influential artists in the American theater". "As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting" is a nonessential modifier to modify the subject. In this case, it suggests "one of the most influential artists in the American theater is an actress and more importantly, is a teacher of acting", which is not necessarily true. The modifier is modifying the wrong subject. What the sentence wanted to convey is that "Stella Adler is an actress and, more importantly, is a teacher of acting".
mszzzz 2016-04-10 01:36:26
The core subject of the sentence is "one of the most influential artists in the American theater". "As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting" is a nonessential modifier to modify the subject. In this case, it suggests "one of the most influential artists in the American theater is an actress and more importantly, is a teacher of acting", which is not necessarily true. The modifier is modifying the wrong subject. What the sentence wanted to convey is that "Stella Adler is an actress and, more importantly, is a teacher of acting".
