As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting, Stella Adler, one of the most influential artists in the American theater, trained several generations of actors who include Marlon Brando and Robert De Niro.
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lilyli0138 2016-01-16 11:04:44
B is incorrect for one of my favorite reasons - it's illogical. The GMAT has evolved to include more of these logic/accuracy errors (instead of adding new grammatical categories as it adds difficulties), and your job here is to check to see if the sentence actually makes sense. "actors who include" would indicate that the actors themselves have Marlon Brando and Robert DeNiro. But the actors are Brando and DeNiro - they don't possess them. This kind of comes back to kvcpk's point - "who" is a reflexive pronoun and, when used as a modifier, has to modify the noun adjacent to it. That means that the phrase "who include" has to directly modify "actors", and since the actors don't "include" Brando/DeNiro as an active verb, it's an illogical statement.
马修斯嚓G 2013-11-03 05:16:44
时态不对。who included
ccorange2004 2014-01-14 17:00:22
1.subject have modifier preceded and followed it which is awkward. 2.include should be included.
shisu0610041 2017-01-07 14:20:17
这里边include做动词时，虽然中文翻译上没什么问题，但是不符合英语的逻辑。"actors who include" would indicate that the actors themselves have Marlon Brando and Robert DeNiro. But the actors are Brando and DeNiro - they don't possess them.
八毛Y 2016-12-02 09:47:07
改变了句子重心，“as a artist, ... she trained some actors”句意不对。
Zoelody 2016-11-26 13:16:50
1.时态不对，应该为who included 2.改变了句子的原意重心：句子原本的重心在于Stella 是一个极具影响力的艺术家，而这个选项错误地把重心变成了一个同位语的修饰成分，而把后面培育了谁作为重心
兔不恬 2016-11-13 18:17:28
who修饰actors不够简洁
果果724 2016-10-07 21:12:58
句子重心改变，原本的主句变成了修饰成分；且大多数优选答案为一个句子，主语谓语；而且有时态错误
Mryega1995 2016-09-27 09:20:58
逻辑。原句强调的是他是最有影响力的artist而不是她训练了谁。
yaomaczhang 2016-09-27 03:14:36
included
meiyouyhm 2016-09-20 17:17:32
另外时态也有问题： trained和后面的include不一致
meiyouyhm 2016-09-20 17:13:36
B改变了句子重心！！！！！Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater－－－－Stella Adler, one of the most influential artists in the American theater...
sasazz 2016-09-17 22:11:44
主语Stella前面已经有一大串定语了，后面又接一堆，不符合主语+谓语一般紧靠的结构
