After several years of rapid growth, the healthy care company became one of the largest health care providers in the metropolitan area, but then it proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its paying doctors and hospitals.
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773 2014-05-12 21:40:53
RON解释C错了好几个地方，其中印象最深的是in its paying doctors，paying在这个结构里即充当名词又充当动词，所以错。充当名词是因为跟在its后面，充当动词是因为跟在doctors前面，语义上不吻合，有歧义。
Goooaway 2016-06-15 14:43:13
prep.+one's+doing往往是不简洁的。paying这个动作就是the health care company执行的，所以不用加上its。 but后面本来是应该加句子的，但是在主语相同的情况下可以省略主语。
sophiayao 2015-09-24 22:41:24
前面的it多余，可以省略(effctiveness)；in its paying，使得paying从动词变成了动名词，不简洁，prep.+one's+doing往往是不简洁的。paying这个动作就是the health care company执行的，所以不用加上its。
ChessyG 2016-12-22 06:03:26
in its paying--paying 从动词改为名词。ineffective
ChessyG 2016-11-28 09:46:48
a. since subject is same after "but", there is no need to again write "it" to refer to HCC. b. "paying" is verb+ing form, it's not gerund so it cannot stand after possessive "its". "payment" would be the right word.
jackshanhang 2016-11-22 23:18:43
既然平行，就无需使用it，要使用it就不平行，也需要谓语
励志yy 2016-11-16 10:15:00
前面的it多余，可以省略(effctiveness)；in its paying，使得paying从动词变成了动名词，不简洁，prep.+one's+doing往往是不简洁的。paying这个动作就是the health care company执行的，所以不用加上its。
salgniko 2016-10-09 16:04:20
one‘s doing sth 杀！
allenzeng 2016-06-01 21:25:49
its paying做名称，后面不能在接doctors and hospitals
chuster 2016-05-28 12:47:13
but 后面是应该接句子的，但是主语相同时可以省略，这样更加简洁，所以but后面可以加动词，与前面的句子的谓语平行。 prep+one's+doing 往往是不简洁的，因为paying就是这个主语的行为，不需要its了。
danislj1227126 2016-05-25 07:02:07
it's paying 不简洁
anne_yu 2016-05-08 14:36:11
前面的it多余，同一个主语可以省略(effctiveness)； in its paying，使得paying从动词变成了动名词，不简洁，prep.+one's+doing往往是不简洁的。paying这个动作就是the health care company执行的，所以不用加上it
