After several years of rapid growth, the healthy care company became one of the largest health care providers in the metropolitan area, while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business and fell months behind in its payment to doctors and hospitals.
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seacychen 2015-03-15 02:32:30
fell可与prove并列，也可与handle并列
qiyeran346 2014-09-29 15:47:22
while is a subordinator that reduce the clause after it to be a subordinate clause, distorts the meaning of the sentence to be nonsensical should be prove itself, or just drop the ambiguous it
jessicachow 2016-02-01 11:01:42
while有 at the same time的意思，与then矛盾。
金子0913 2016-08-02 18:21:47
while 虽然表示转折，但是还是有at the same time 的意思，跟then 不搭配。its payment 还是不如 in paying 的动词形式好
LancyXu 2016-05-19 13:42:52
While在表示转折对比时，有两件events同时发生的含义。
Ivycoco 2016-03-21 06:43:15
while有at the same time 的意思，与then矛盾
xiaobaitu 2016-02-19 12:01:20
即便表示转折对比，while也有"at the same time"的含义在里面，与then矛盾，
ypheroin 2016-01-24 09:51:51
补充：Manhattan的解释 -- The word "while" indicates "at the same time." You are right that we can use it to mean "although." However, the meaning is not clear here with the word "while." Thus, "but" is better.
ypheroin 2016-01-24 09:48:01
fall 和 handle不是并列关系，用and不如用falling表示修饰cannot handle
vickiaro 2015-11-18 15:45:47
While在表示转折对比时，有两件events同时发生的含义。所以while句中的then不合适。
old4gaming 2015-09-17 20:33:14
while表转折时也有表达同时的意思？
jessie_yanhui 2015-09-13 11:54:28
pay sb/payment to sb and fell不对，主语it不指公司！
