A technique that was originally developed for detecting air pollutants and has the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance quickly and without destroying the substance, called proton-induced X-ray emission, is finding uses in medicine, archaeology, and criminology.
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FreyaDoubles 2016-03-11 20:42:53
这种修饰结构很不好：。。。。，called。。。，
charlotteli 2015-09-21 08:06:25
called 必须紧被修饰词
iris88208 2014-09-26 15:01:07
that was/ has the ability to --wordy, called 应该放在 a technique 后面，且不能用逗号隔开
froyo 2016-10-11 17:38:24
called 修饰到了substance上面去（done是就近修饰）
sss要上港中文a 2016-09-12 07:50:34
called...修饰到了substance上
LM檬先森。 2016-06-03 21:38:04
E：主谓离得太远了； called proton-induced X-ray emission 应该紧跟a technique，并且没有号 隔开；has the ability to啰嗦；without destroying the substance重复两遍substance ; and without destroying 无并列对象；非限定性定从和限定性定从不能互换，A 中都是非限定 性修饰 a technique ，这里变成了限定性。逻辑上不需要
yy1646 2015-10-23 20:12:17
called 修饰substance错
生日在立夏 2015-09-14 08:55:42
called修饰substance
shirleyQ 2015-04-11 19:41:56
出现两次substance，语义重复 且A technique与 called proton-induced X-ray emission离的太远容易歧义
violetjie 2014-11-24 22:58:53
called应该修饰technique，但是因为隔得太远，所以就近修饰substance
nicolexzs 2014-10-02 16:43:57
更加头重脚轻，且用ability改变了原句中的can
