A technique originally developed for detecting air pollutants, called proton-induced X-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, is finding uses in medicine, archaeology, and criminology.
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ccorange2004 2014-01-29 15:25:33
找到which所修饰的词到底是哪个。这里只能是technique。但是这里的which离techique太远了，只能就近修饰x-ray emission "(Noun) (modifier), (modifer), which" - in this structure, we've separated what had been the necessary descriptive phrase from the noun, so it is no longer a part of any extended noun phrase. As a result, the "which" in this case really does only apply to "emission" rather than to a "technique called emission" b/c "a technique called emission" as a simple noun phrase, is no longer part of the sentence
FreyaDoubles 2016-03-11 20:41:14
c、d这种修饰结构非常不好 called proton－induced x－ray。。。很有修饰air pollutant的歧义
iris88208 2014-09-26 14:58:09
called。。。。。应该放在a technique 后面，而且不要用逗号隔开。which 错误修饰了 emission。
feizhutou 2016-09-21 04:09:41
which 在这里原本应该修饰technique 距离太远 就近修饰 emission 在这里不能作为主语 发出 analysis 的动作
sss要上港中文a 2016-09-12 07:50:13
called...修饰到了pollutants上
LM檬先森。 2016-06-03 21:37:23
C: called proton-induced X-ray emission 应该紧跟a technique，并且不用逗号隔开 ，在这里就近修饰了pollutants; Which 指代了emission, 不合逻辑 ，中间修饰语太多，所以指代不到 a technique;
杀鸡的熊 2016-04-06 10:40:49
which离techique太远了，只能就近修饰x-ray emission
Eason633 2016-02-12 12:54:18
which 指代不明， 应该指代a technique, 这里会造成指代 air pollutant 的歧义
彩色的你 2015-11-27 12:18:32
which 修饰emission
passerbyv 2015-11-21 18:04:25
此处called就近修饰了pollutants，错！应该紧跟a technique
loanic 2015-11-06 05:58:48
called应该紧邻technique
生日在立夏 2015-09-14 08:55:09
called修饰pollutants
