called ... 是分词做定语,不是同谓语,不用逗号隔开。把分词修饰语放这里,使which 和 technique 隔的太远
called 错误同C,which 修饰逗号前面的名词;has the ability to。。。显得wordy
原句用can,不要改成ability,改变句意
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D: called proton-induced X-ray emission 应该紧跟a technique ,并且没有逗号隔开,在这里就近修饰了pollutants; Which 指代了emission,不合逻辑 ,中间修饰语太多,所以指代不到 a technique;; has the ability to啰嗦
has the ability to...没有can好,wordy have the capability/possibility of 错误 called.....必须紧跟a technique
called应该修饰technique,但是因为隔得太远,所以就近修饰pollutants
has the ability to 太wordy了
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