An executive who is heavily committed to a course of action is likely to miss or misinterpret signs of incipient trouble when they do appear, especially if it has worked well in the past.
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Egoyiyy 2016-03-05 15:20:14
logic subject 和代词之间不能隔太多名词，否则就会造成指代不清。it在此处指代不清，可能指代trouble
saintyyu 2014-03-30 14:48:51
especially if it has worked well in the past中的it指代不明。是指代trouble，还是course，还是executive，或者是整句话呢?
Rippen3 2016-07-21 21:46:15
"When they appear"应该是单数，因为应该修饰"trouble"。
唐豆包 2016-11-25 18:46:51
可以从语义上来理解：打个比方，原意是：我买口红的时候很关注色号，特别是以前试过的色号，可能会使我忽略它的功效。换成C选项是这样说的：我买口红很关注色号，可能会忽略功效，特别是那些我试过色号的。两者是有很大区别的哦。
唐豆包 2016-11-25 18:46:50
可以从语义上来理解：打个比方，原意是：我买口红的时候很关注色号，特别是以前试过的色号，可能会使我忽略它的功效。换成C选项是这样说的：我买口红很关注色号，可能会忽略功效，特别是那些我试过色号的。两者是有很大区别的哦。
jackshanhang 2016-11-05 04:32:07
when they do appear修饰了平行的动词miss or misinterpret不合逻辑
糯米团子QUQ 2016-11-01 14:05:20
it指代不明！
Zee5284 2016-11-01 02:13:22
they指代signs。it前面有不止一个单数名词，指代会出现歧义。
糯米团子QUQ 2016-10-07 00:16:57
An executive who is heavily committed to a course of action is likely to miss or misinterpret signs of incipient trouble when they do appear, especially if it has worked well in the past. This choice does not distort the original meaning of the sentence. However, from this sentence it is not clear as to what has worked well in the past. Thus, this sentence has pronoun reference error for “it”
borax7 2016-10-03 16:32:39
when they do appear修饰了平行的动词miss or misinterpret不合逻辑，明明miss了还do appear矛盾；especially if it has worked well in the past远离它修饰的course of action，使得it离所指的a course of action太远不好。
cc佬 2016-09-23 00:15:09
when they do appear修饰了平行的动词miss or misinterpret不合逻辑，明明miss了还do appear矛盾；especially if it has worked well in the past远离它修饰的course of action，使得it离所指的a course of action太远不好。 句意王道。
meiyouyhm 2016-09-22 23:47:10
especially if it has worked well in the past远离它修饰的course of action，指代不明
Queeniebaby 2016-09-21 17:21:35
when they do appear修饰了平行的动词miss or misinterpret不合逻辑，明明miss了还do appear矛盾
