In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
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Garrett 2014-07-26 10:25:44
with不恰当； thati is a simple one 不够简洁
Deprofundis 2014-07-04 21:36:26
with的独立主格作状语修饰began,表明是这个活动的主题，而这里应该是指这本书的主题。
tz_yj 2014-10-21 11:48:03
with表伴随修饰began,表明这个行动的发起是thesis,而实际上thesis应该是这本书的主题
阿卜灵 2016-06-06 19:30:20
with在逗号后做伴随，代表前面整句话。但在这里应该只代表a Better World。
hoper 2016-05-08 09:38:51
D. with的错误同A，后面a thesis that is a simple one不简洁。
anne_yu 2016-05-07 16:55:55
用with引导的非限定性短语做伴随状语 修饰began错误，正确应该用whose指出这本书的主题。 另外that is a simple one 啰嗦
allenzeng 2016-05-04 07:15:04
用with引导非限制性状语结构修饰前面整个句子不妥，此处本意是修饰shopping for a better world 这本书的，应该用whose引导的定语从句修饰
猫儿十 2015-10-25 09:51:21
a thesis that is simple用法不简洁，可直接使用a simple thesis.
khuntoria950817 2015-07-28 21:58:24
a thesis that is a simple one 不简洁
Jessicajy 2015-06-06 17:19:03
with的错误同A，后面a thesis that is a simple one不简洁
Jessicasisi 2015-02-03 12:27:07
with的错误同A，后面a thesis that is a simple one不简洁。
SharonMiss 2014-11-07 18:41:03
用with引导的非限定性短语做伴随状语错误，with的独立主格作状语在文法上修饰began,表明是这个活动的主题，而邏輯上应该是指这本书的主题。
