In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, which had the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
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veravane 2015-11-08 20:47:21
thesis of doing 累赘
LaraNg 2016-09-20 18:44:56
thesis应该用同位语从句修饰，thesis of sb. doing sth.结构中thesis的核心只是sb.，而并不是”sb做某事”
piupiu雨雨 2014-11-01 21:12:01
thesis of sb. doing sth.累赘，结构含糊
hoper 2016-05-08 09:38:59
B. Thesis应该用同位语从句修饰；thesis of sb. doing sth.累赘，结构含糊。
tian4690 2016-03-24 06:04:41
"having the power..." is an -ing modifier that's not followed by a comma. therefore, it's a modifier that serves as an adjective, modifying the immediately preceding noun (= "consumers").
leelokwan 2015-10-27 16:47:41
应该用同谓语定语从句修饰thesis
猫儿十 2015-10-25 09:50:16
thesis of sb doing 这种用法awkward。
Jessicajy 2015-06-13 16:01:47
thesis应该用同位语从句修饰，thesis of sb. doing sth.结构中thesis的核心只是sb.，而并不是”sb做某事”
Letitia啊小啦 2015-03-25 00:38:46
Thesis应该用同位语从句修饰；thesis of sb. doing sth.累赘，结构含糊
Jessicasisi 2015-02-03 12:26:14
Thesis应该用同位语从句修饰；thesis of sb. doing sth.累赘，结构含糊。
chertung 2015-01-04 18:56:36
V A N判定，动词好于形容词好于名词，所以，用一大串名词词组不如用一个从句来修饰前面的名词
