In her 26 years in the forests of Gombe, Jane Goodall collected data that proved that chimpanzees exhibit the kind of curiosity where new patterns of behavior and expression are passed on to others by imitation and practice
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camellia00738 2015-10-02 11:36:46
Where用法错误，先行词并不是表示地点、位置的名词，所以用where不合适；are在语义上太过绝对，不如"情态动词+be"好；from each one to others用法错误。
camellia00738 2015-10-02 11:36:47
Where用法错误，先行词并不是表示地点、位置的名词，所以用where不合适；are在语义上太过绝对，不如"情态动词+be"好；from each one to others用法错误。
Ellen1889 2014-07-29 22:40:31
where 不对 are 太绝对了
