In her 26 years in the forests of Gombe, Jane Goodall collected data that proved that chimpanzees will exhibit the kind of curiosity so that new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed on from one to another by imitating and practicing
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nicolexzs 2014-10-22 20:30:08
将来时时态不对，虽然will+v.可以表达的某个动作的常常发生(略带预测的味道)，但此处为描述科研成果用一般现在时更为恰当。 so that用法不对，so that + v.引导的是目的性状语。 by imitating and practicing不如by imitation和practice好。 by+ 动名词(by imitating and practicing)和by+名词(by imitation and practice)的区别还是在于：doing为动名词形式描述的是动作的发生，noun则是对动作的单纯描述。
zheng911 2014-12-31 04:26:43
prove that ... 表示事实，用一般现在时 so that ... + 情态动词+... 表示目的，不适用于本句
ricardo20 2014-12-02 12:09:49
so that用法不对，so that + v.引导的是目的性状语。curiosity不是目的在于，恰恰相反，curiosity是pass on的原因
