Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
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wx5u080 2014-12-15 12:57:25
注意加了Both后，and 前后的对称是both in .. and in .. 另： if you preface someone's name with a noun describing their occupation (or other word describing what that person does), WITHOUT AN ARTICLE, OR WITH THE DEFINITE ARTICLE "THE", you DO NOT use a comma. 如果把职位、称号放在人名前面，如果没有冠词，或者有定冠词，就不用逗号（本题的情况）。 example: Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk ... --> correct 注意： if you are using "THE (description) (name)" to introduce someone for the first time, then you DON'T use a comma.但有要注意：当职位、称号前是定冠词时，如果是第一次提到某人，是不必用逗号的example: The author Ernest Hemingway was known for his drunken and violent escapades. --> here we are introducing hemingway, so we don't use a comma. if you have already introduced two or more people, but you are using "THE (description) to single out one of them, then you DO use a comma.example： Among her friends were an author and a painter; the author, Ernest Hemingway, went on to become an icon of American literature. --> we've already introduced "the author"; this time we use a comma to single him out. if there's an indefinite article (a/an), you DO use a comma. 如果前面有不定冠词，就要用逗号。example A jazz pianist and composer, Thelonious Monk ... --> correct if it's an adjective, you DO use a comma. 如果前面不是职位、称号，而是一个形容词，那就要用逗号。 example: Creative and original, Thelonious Monk ... --> correct
小灰灰 2014-03-30 14:05:21
如果把职位、称号放在人名前面，如果没有冠词，或者有定冠词，就不用逗号（本题的情况）。但有要注意：当职位、称号前是定冠词时，如果是第一次提到某人，是不必用逗号；如果前面有不定冠词，就要用逗号。 A jazz pianist and composer, Thelonious Monk。如果前面不是职位、称号，而是一个形容词，那就要用逗号
凡糕君 2016-07-15 11:06:53
both…and平行结构，正确的搭配是Both X and Y 或 Both in X and in Y.故而both用在此处不合适，结构不完整，排除ABE；C没有谓语，正确为D
qwertyuo 2016-12-23 14:36:29
空/the+职位人名 a +职位，人名
Calrsson 2016-12-06 15:28:49
yet前后出现平行结构
sasazz 2016-09-23 12:01:20
Manhattan： if you preface someone's name with a noun describing their occupation (or other word describing what that person does), WITHOUT AN ARTICLE, OR WITH THE DEFINITE ARTICLE "THE", you DO NOT use a comma. 如果把职位、称号放在人名前面，如果没有冠词，或者有定冠词，就不用逗号；前面如果有不定冠词a，或者不是职位、称号而是形容词，就要用逗号。
feizhutou 2016-09-20 23:15:13
produced a body of work that（定语从句 that 不可省） was rooted in.. tradition(主语） of ... yet in many ways ... 取消both这个词，就可以避免in and （in） duke ellington 这边不平行的问题
feizhutou 2016-09-20 23:02:37
职位，称号放在人名之前，如果没有冠词或者有定冠词（the）就不用，隔开 如果有不定冠词，（a）就要用，隔开 that引导的从句
Queeniebaby 2016-09-20 22:08:03
职位优先于同位语
sss要上港中文a 2016-09-06 12:06:23
Jazz pianist and composer 放在前面，比A的定语从句、B的同位语 简洁。
Mitchie 2016-07-24 13:36:51
排除法 both是misleading的 他的work只有一个root 排除三个选项 还有一个缺谓语 （看清语义） 从结构上看 root in 也不可插入both 或者应该both in and in 来平行 Correct Idiom is: Both X and Y OR Both in X and in Y.
瑞雪兆丰年 2016-07-12 12:43:36
平行结构：Both X and Y 或 Both in X and in Y.
