Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
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zkw7295 2016-04-25 16:58:45
不需要用到both，后面只有一种来源（虽然是两个人的）
allenbro 2015-09-05 13:06:26
同位语，不必要的语法复杂。
libeili 2015-09-28 19:25:35
both and 没有这样的说法
zeonhin 2016-10-05 16:53:45
both...and的平行结构错误 TM的修饰语不够简洁
Queeniebaby 2016-09-20 22:05:14
both 前后不平行
sss要上港中文a 2016-09-06 12:03:00
both...and 之间平行。both限定了第一个平行对象的范围。1.不平行。in 和 n. (A选项是：rooted 和 n.) 2. 理解句意，of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington。没有both一说，both多余。 C选项主句缺谓语。
Hydi 2016-07-26 16:07:50
Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer不如Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk简洁
胖哒鱼 2016-07-01 16:45:35
both…and平行结构，正确的搭配是Both X and Y 或 Both in X and in Y. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer不如Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk简洁； 补充说明 关于同位语用法中的the和逗号（如B选项中的TM, the jazz pianist and composer）--摘自Manhattan： if you preface someone's name with a noun describing their occupation (or other word describing what that person does), WITHOUT AN ARTICLE, OR WITH THE DEFINITE ARTICLE "THE", you DO NOT use a comma. 如果把职位、称号放在人名前面，如果没有冠词，或者有定冠词，就不用逗号（本题的情况）。 example: Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk ... --> correct 注意： if you are using "THE (description) (name)" to introduce someone for the first time, then you DON'T use a comma.但有要注意：当职位、称号前是定冠词时，如果是第一次提到某人，是不必用逗号的example: The author Ernest Hemingway was known for his drunken and violent escapades. --> here we are introducing hemingway, so we don't use a comma. if you have already introduced two or more people, but you are using "THE (description) to single out one of them, then you DO use a comma.example： Among her friends were an author and a painter; the author, Ernest Hemingway, went on to become an icon of American literature. --> we've already introduced "the author"; this time we use a comma to single him out. if there's an indefinite article (a/an), you DO use a comma. 如果前面有不定冠词，就要用逗号。example A jazz pianist and composer, Thelonious Monk ... --> correct if it's an adjective, you DO use a comma. 如果前面不是职位、称号，而是一个形容词，那就要用逗号。 example: Creative and original, Thelonious Monk ... --> correct
托福必胜！！！ 2016-05-30 12:56:39
both X and Y is not parallel in the current sentence both in the ... and in the ...
ztg591 2016-05-30 11:10:50
both X and Y is not parallel in the current sentenc同位语，不必要的语法复杂。e
siasiasia 2016-04-15 12:19:32
both and不平行；职位直接写在人名前面不加逗号；
杀鸡的熊 2016-04-07 16:22:05
both X and Y is not parallel in the current sentence
