Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
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saintyyu 2014-03-30 15:26:15
rooted both更优；
chuster 2016-06-02 15:25:09
看到这种who/which/that was的就要想到它是不简洁的，但是这个不能用来判断绝对的对错。再看后面的both and里面的内容是否平行。
TurnSun 2015-04-12 20:39:49
用非限定性定语从句不如用同位语简洁
Calrsson 2016-12-06 15:28:49
both...yet... 搭配错误 杀
咩ssimo_Lucky 2016-11-22 18:23:15
a body of work rooted in…… and in …… both 放在 rooted 之后更合适，因为“两者”是rooted的来源，而不是a body of work
hesiuan 2015-12-09 14:37:44
who 可以做非限制性定从
飞舞的彩蝶 2015-10-21 08:52:19
both and 中的对象不对称，所以杀掉ABE
周黑鸭 2015-10-03 15:28:32
both…and平行结构，正确的搭配是Both X and Y 或 Both in X and in Y.
yiran32069 2015-09-23 08:50:47
both and 结构不完整
Cheriez 2015-09-01 23:11:24
Correct Idiom is: Both X and Y OR Both in X and in Y. X and Y are parallel.
Windancer0421 2015-08-13 12:51:47
1. both的位置不对 2. rooted both in X and in Y, 但是后面没有in，所以的 rooted in X and Y
moneysharon 2015-08-06 02:58:16
[我]同位語不用who[正解]1。平行结构，both rooted in…and in…才平行，但是原句中没有平行，所以不应该使用both 2。who was a jazz pianist and composer定语从句没有必要，累赘
