The electronics company has unveiled what it claims is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing less than 11 ounces.
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blanche001 2014-10-01 08:16:10
is 表示完全替代，这里的意思就是A的长度是B 的长度 意思不对 这里应该想表达的是A和B 一样长
Echo0416 2014-08-05 07:54:25
【.......， + V-ing modifier.....】（修饰逗号正前面整个clause或clause主语（不是主句的主语；是紧挨着Ving modifier的逗号前的从句主语！！！） 【① the modifier itself MODIFIES THE PRECEDING CLAUSE (not just the noun that precedes the comma); ②the SUBJECT of the ‘preceding’ clause is the IMPLIED SUBJECT of the -ING word.】 the above 2 principles explain what is wrong with (e): the nearest clause has "the length of which" as its subject. therefore, "..., weighing" is making the ludicrous proposition that the length weighs about 11 ounces.
Echo0416 2014-08-05 08:00:43
if you have【clause1, clause2, -ING........】 then,the -ING will modify clause2, not clause1. 【example: the truck spilled a tankful of gasoline, some of which spilled into the river, killing a large number of fish. -----> note that "killing a large number..." modifies the immediately preceding clause, not the first clause】
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-24 21:42:58
when you have a COMMA + -ING modifier, two things apply: * the modifier itself MODIFIES THE PRECEDING CLAUSE (not just the noun that precedes the comma); and * the SUBJECT of the preceding clause is the IMPLIED SUBJECT of the -ING word. the above 2 principles explain what is wrong with (e): the nearest clause has "the length of which" as its subject. therefore, "..., weighing" is making the ludicrous proposition that the length weighs about 11 ounces.
barzaar 2016-12-19 13:01:44
when you have a COMMA + -ING modifier, two things apply: * the modifier itself MODIFIES THE PRECEDING CLAUSE (not just the noun that precedes the comma); and * the SUBJECT of the preceding clause is the IMPLIED SUBJECT of the -ING word. the above 2 principles explain what is wrong with (e): the nearest clause has "the length of which" as its subject. therefore, "..., weighing" is making the ludicrous proposition that the length weighs about 11 ounces.
Lottieeee 2016-07-28 10:35:53
ing修飾前一子句/子句主詞，因此會變成 the length of which (S) weighing less than 11 ounces
ocean09960802 2016-05-27 16:49:04
weighing指向了之前的computer
pflee 2016-02-21 17:07:43
weighing指向了之前的computer
Winnie528 2015-10-06 11:04:20
weighing 可能修饰computer，歧义
old4gaming 2015-10-03 00:11:37
weighing的逻辑主语错
malimalihon 2015-10-02 09:57:05
weighing修饰不明确
庞呵呵 2015-08-02 21:59:18
the length of A is the length of B，错误同A;weighing的逻辑主语为the length of camcorder逻辑错误
gloria熊 2015-05-14 15:45:17
weighing的发出对象有歧义
