语法 Sentence Correction-4024

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The electronics company has unveiled what it claims is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs less than 11 ounces.

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香蕉小姐 2015-05-01 21:10:55

It claims为插入成分,这一现象大多数考生在此处为第一次遇到,因此很多考生会认为claim的正确搭配为claim to do something,因而排除BCD选项。实际上is和to be在选项中都是正确的表达:若为is,可理解为it claims是插入成分;若为to be,则可理解成what it claims to be…这一大家都 很熟悉的表达。此题难度确实比较高,这个考点在此题中起到了不小的迷惑考生的作用。但是, 通过以上各选项的分析不难看出,即使不考虑is和to be的区别,通过其他考点,我们也可以排除掉ACE。在实际考试中,如果考生遇到不熟悉的考点,尽量不要依据这一单一考点判断,应比较选项中的其他差别,综合比较后再做出选择。

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ritarong 2015-03-12 22:00:13

考点:代词指代,逻辑论元, (1)代词指代:未划线部分的it指代company,而在AC划线部分出现的it也应该指代company,公司重量不到11盎司。不和逻辑,排除AC。 (2)逻辑论元:BE中,现在分词weighing可作两种解释(在句尾作状语;作非限定性定语)前者的逻辑主语是company,后者的逻辑主语是hadheld computer。除了weighing本身引起歧义以外,它的逻辑主语也不和逻辑。排除BE。

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xiaowen1221 2015-03-04 15:06:50

考点:代词指代,逻辑论元, (1)代词指代:未划线部分的it指代company,而在AC划线部分出现的it也应该指代company,公司重量不到11盎司。不和逻辑,排除AC。 (2)逻辑论元:BE中,现在分词weighing可作两种解释(在句尾作状语;作非限定性定语)前者的逻辑主语是company,后者的逻辑主语是hadheld computer。除了weighing本身引起歧义以外,它的逻辑主语也不和逻辑。排除BE。

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jackshanhang 2016-11-13 05:53:50

Hei - They are claiming that it IS something - not that it "to be" something - so, no, we wouldn't use "to be" here. We'd say "the company has unveiled what it claims is the world's smallest..." I could say, though, "she claims to be a violinist, but I've heard her play and she's terrible." So there are circumstances in which you could use "claim to be" - but this isn't one of them. "claim to be" is only used when the person making the claim is talking about him/herself. i.e., my five-year-old brother james claims to be the principal conductor of the boston symphony orchestra --> correct, because james is tal

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YukiKMF 2016-10-02 17:46:40

"as long as a handheld computer" 和什么什么一样长嘛 并不是什么严格比较平行哦

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chreihsu 2016-08-04 14:55:38

The electronics company has unveiled the network digital camcorder. The ec claims the network digital camcorder is the world's smallest ndc. The ndc is as long as a handheld computer. The ndc weighs less than 11 ounces.

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瑞雪兆丰年 2016-07-10 22:57:00

(1)(A)(C)的it,有可能修飾the length或handheld computer,也有可能修飾The electronics company的歧義(pron.應優先指代原題S.),有ambiguity的問題. (2)(B)(E)的weighing,有可能修飾逗號前的handheld computer,也有可能是The electronics company所發出的動作,有dangling modifier的歧義.

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sylviaw2016 2016-07-09 15:32:18

the length of A is the length of B是错误的 主系表中 表应是属性 即一样长 而不是 长度是长度(完全替代)+ 连续两个modifier 可能夹心结构 即不知道weighing 主语到底是谁 歧义!重要!

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Chloefxy 2016-06-18 16:12:43

It claims为插入成分,这一现象大多数考生在此处为第一次遇到,因此很多考生会认为claim的正确搭配为claim to do something,因而排除BCD选项。实际上is和to be在选项中都是正确的表达:若为is,可理解为it claims是插入成分;若为to be,则可理解成what it claims to be…这一大家都 很熟悉的表达。此题难度确实比较高,这个考点在此题中起到了不小的迷惑考生的作用。但是, 通过以上各选项的分析不难看出,即使不考虑is和to be的区别,通过其他考点,我们也可以排除掉ACE。在实际考试中,如果考生遇到不熟悉的考点,尽量不要依据这一单一考点判断,应比较选项中的其他差别,综合比较后再做出选择。

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chuster 2016-05-28 21:17:04

what (it claims) is..

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lxs19950206 2016-05-21 17:00:52

The electronics company has unveiled what it claims is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs less than 11 ounces.

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TJNing0402 2016-05-15 11:33:45

what it claims 是主语从句

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huiminzi1124 2016-04-26 12:08:03

考点:代词指代,逻辑论元, (1)代词指代:未划线部分的it指代company,而在AC划线部分出现的it也应该指代company,公司重量不到11盎司。不和逻辑,排除AC。 (2)逻辑论元:BE中,现在分词weighing可作两种解释(在句尾作状语;作非限定性定语)前者的逻辑主语是company,后者的逻辑主语是hadheld computer。除了weighing本身引起歧义以外,它的逻辑主语也不和逻辑。排除BE。

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