The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.
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lkid 2015-10-08 22:50:03
the length of the camcorder (which指代) is the length (that指代) of the a handheld computer，逻辑不合理。the length of which is the length of sth. “长度是长度”的表述 （×） ——which is as long as sth （√） is as long as and weighs同修饰camcorder，应同时被which所引导，在which从句内部。A选项用it而非which指代，导致指代不清，并且使得and it weighs部分脱离从句笼罩，这样产生了and it weighs属于第一层次，与the company has unveiled并列的歧义，且在这种情况下，it优先指代company
biubiu724 2014-06-09 05:53:32
it有歧义，可能会指代前面的the length
lenka0monica 2014-07-19 19:04:48
the length of which is that of a handheld computer用is（就是）逻辑上不合理，而应该用as long as and it weighs中的it指代不清，意思上指camcorder，但逻辑上指前面的computer
queenkat 2016-10-24 20:26:46
1、the length of which is thta of ...是错误表达， 不是“什么的长是什么的长”，而应该用“as long as”表达长度相等 2、，and it weighs用法里it指代company，逻辑错误，应该不要逗号
要考满分的晚琳儿 2016-10-18 09:18:35
1、the length of which is thta of ...是错误表达， 不是“什么的长是什么的长”，而应该用“as long as”表达长度相等 2、，and it weighs用法里it指代company，逻辑错误，应该不要逗号
要考满分的晚琳儿 2016-10-18 09:18:33
1、the length of which is thta of ...是错误表达， 不是“什么的长是什么的长”，而应该用“as long as”表达长度相等 2、，and it weighs用法里it指代company，逻辑错误，应该不要逗号
yaomaczhang 2016-10-05 02:10:25
it已经指company了
yaomaczhang 2016-09-26 22:51:38
it在同个句子里有两个
Goooaway 2016-09-08 15:55:51
It claims为插入成分，很多考生会认为claim的正 确搭配为claim to do something，因而排除BCD选项。 what it claims 是名词从句(nominal relative clause, this kind of clause functions like a noun group)， 是 is 的主语。what=the thing(s) which, 后面常跟 be(is or was) " 此题用to be反而错误：摘自曼哈顿 Hei - They are claiming that it IS something - not that it "to be" something - so, no, we wouldn't use "to be" here. We'd say "the company has unveiled what it claims is the world's smallest..." I could say, though, "she claims to be a violinist, but I've heard her play and she's terrible." So there are circumstances in which you could use "claim to be" - but this isn't one of them. "claim to be" is only used when the person making the claim is talking about him/herself. i.e., my five-year-old brother james claims to be the principal conductor of the boston symphony orchestra --> correct, because james is tall.
Lottieeee 2016-07-28 10:27:15
They are claiming that it IS something - not that it "to be" something - so, no, we wouldn't use "to be" here. We'd say "the company has unveiled what it claims is the world's smallest..." I could say, though, "she claims to be a violinist, but I've heard her play and she's terrible." So there are circumstances in which you could use "claim to be" - but this isn't one of them.
fantasticW 2016-06-17 09:28:56
it有歧义，可能会指代前面的the length
Sparrow_7 2016-06-01 21:54:12
it 指代不清
fishanne 2016-01-15 23:19:25
it 前面指代company 这里指代camcorder 指代不清
