Defense attorneys have occasionally argued that their clients' misconduct stemmed from a reaction to something ingested, but in attributing behavior that is criminal or delinquent to an allergy to some food, the perpetrators are in effect told that they are not responsible for their actions.
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sss要上港中文a 2016-09-11 19:51:11
behavior that is criminal or delinquent 冗余
Courtneybb 2015-06-14 10:07:06
"in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy" modifies "perpetrators" because "perpetrators" comes right after that phrase.
annie654 2016-05-07 13:19:03
in attributing。。变成一个修饰perpetrator的介词短语，与原句逻辑不服；；n.+that be..是不好的表达
meiyouyhm 2016-09-22 23:06:05
此句in attributing....动作发起者是the perpetrator，应该是辩护律师
lyf0420 2015-11-28 17:09:20
语法--attributing主语不是 perpetrators(犯罪者)
Heyiii 2015-09-12 19:30:47
in attributing的主语应该是defense attorney，而不是perpetrators。wordy and imprecise。
Charlotte0305 2015-06-27 10:24:51
看到in + doing 第一反应去找主语，是否是动作的发出者
ppj 2014-12-27 19:00:58
除了动作发出者的不匹配外，behavior that is criminal or delinquent 这个修饰也太不简洁了
ccorange2004 2014-01-28 12:22:32
发起attribute的人应该是defense attroneys
