The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million as a part of a deal to make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
语法 Sentence Correction-3489
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Monicca 2016-12-01 14:25:09
to do 的动作发出者和主句主语保持一致
时光老人 2015-12-25 17:42:14
to make的逻辑主语是the company,不合逻辑，错
pcsix06 2014-10-08 19:52:00
to make的逻辑主语是company不对
ronlee 2017-01-16 10:05:30
computer company使得它自己成为最大的制造商，错误。应该是，这笔交易使得这家公司成为最大的制造商。
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-21 11:22:11
if you use the infinitive "to make", then the computer company is still the subject of the sentence. therefore, in this case you have to use the reflexive pronoun: itself. as an analogy, i can't look at me in the mirror, but i can look at myself in the mirror. same deal.
das123456 2016-12-12 11:05:34
Use of will is preferred here because the company will be a leader in future.
das123456 2016-12-12 11:04:43
用to make, make的主语还是computer company，computer company make it (=computer company)…不合逻辑，应改为：computer company make itself…
leahliulliu1 2016-11-18 14:14:18
make的动作发出者与句子主语保持一致，主语为computer company，it也为computer company
sasazz 2016-11-15 12:04:38
用to make, make的主语还是computer company，computer company make it (=computer company)…不合逻辑，这种情况下应使用反身代词，改为：computer company make itself…
励志yy 2016-11-11 17:34:31
重点不在part前是否有a，而是to make使其主语还是computer company，所以make后面的it 应该用itself。
Queeniebaby 2016-09-16 13:10:35
to make 主语是 company，不对；主语应该是deal
梅干菜要和gmat分手 2016-07-29 17:37:11
if you use the infinitive "to make", then the computer company is still the subject of the sentence. therefore, in this case you have to use the reflexive pronoun: itself. as an analogy, i can't look at me in the mirror, but i can look at myself in the mirror. same deal.
