Each year companies in the United States could save as much as $58 billion annually in employee illness prevention and gain as much as 0 billion through worker performance improved by simply providing offices with cleaner air.
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seline_lover 2015-10-31 10:22:37
annually和each year意思表达重复；in employee illness prevention表达笨拙,与用动词相比，尽量不要用动词的抽象名词形式
softgirlshadow 2015-11-05 23:35:22
by preventing结构比in… prevention结构意思表达更清晰，in employee illness prevention表达笨拙
ypheroin 2015-12-26 17:31:49
1. annually 2. in prevention 表达笨拙 3. in prevention 与 through worker performance improved 不平行
励志yy 2016-11-07 10:41:39
annually 和each year 重复；表示动作的名词prevention用法不如preventing
Sparrow_7 2016-03-18 21:51:08
annually与Each year重复
martinachoi 2015-12-18 16:06:40
annually和each year意思表达重复
CLAIRE513 2015-08-25 14:47:52
each year和annually redundant
asd8176 2014-10-19 00:04:46
(B) annually和each year意思表达重复
MagalieZ 2014-10-07 18:06:48
annually和each year表达意思重复！！！！
