语法 Sentence Correction-3054

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The Anasazi settlements at Chaco Canyon were built on a spectacular scale of more than 75 carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms and with each connected by a complex regional system of roads.

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shisu0610041 2015-05-17 17:13:50

将 with 改变成 of 后,介词的修饰对象发生改变;原句 with 结构修饰 built,而 of 结构修饰的是 scale; 将插入语变成句子一部分后,each 同位语修饰的对象也发生改变,变成了修饰最邻近的 rooms 而不 是 structures,rooms 被马路连接不符合题目原意和逻辑表达

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BobZ 2015-12-16 19:21:36

按D答案给出的句意,with each和on a spectacular scale平行,但each connected by改变了原文的句意,原文没有表达出每一个都被连接的意义

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spyalien 2014-11-05 21:52:28

choice d: - 'scale of' doesn't make sense - the use of AND sets up ostensible parallelism, but the two structures given aren't parallel (one starts with of and the other with with)

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停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-19 12:02:54

As I tried to explain above, there is no noun that makes sense for "each" in choice D. So, there's no point in trying to assign it to any particular noun"”it doesn't reasonably apply to any noun.

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snow199511 2016-06-27 19:00:18

and with // of...

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siasiasia 2016-04-11 17:59:42

with each修饰错误 变成了修饰structures

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Sparrow_7 2016-03-15 22:35:35

and with 没有平行对象

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ypheroin 2015-12-22 19:31:28

使用and 将on a spectacular scale 和 with each connected 并列,Canyon峡谷由道路连接,原句没有这层意思

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愤怒的小飞机 2015-12-13 23:31:49

with each跟of more than不对前面是单数的scale,不对;跟on a spectacular橘子就变得很奇怪 built with each connected

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seline_lover 2015-10-29 11:13:34

按D答案给出的句意,with each和on a spectacular scale平行,但each connected by改变了原文的句意,原文没有表达出每一个都被连接的意义

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Winnie528 2015-10-06 14:03:03

将with变成了of,使得more than 75 carefully engineered structures修饰成了scale, of up to 600 rooms由插入语变成了句子的一部分,这样后面的each修饰成了rooms,逻辑不对

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gloria熊 2015-10-02 11:09:23

[改变原文句意]with each和on a spectacular scale平行,但each connected by改变了原文的句意,原文没有表达出每一个都被连接的意义

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