语法 Sentence Correction-3053

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The Anasazi settlements at Chaco Canyon were built on a spectacular scale of more than 75 carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms, each that had been connected by a complex regional system of roads.

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BobZ 2015-12-16 19:20:53

将 with改变成of后,介词的修饰对象发生改变;原句with结构修饰built,而of结构修饰的是scale;将插入语变成句子一部分后,each同位语修饰的对象也发生改变,变成了修饰最邻近的rooms而不是structures,rooms被马路连接不符合题目原意和逻辑表达

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阿阿阿阿阿阿水 2014-11-03 12:02:01

将 with改变成of后,介词的修饰对象发生改变;原句with结构修饰built,而of结构修饰的是scale;将插入语变成句子一部分后,each同位语修饰的对象也发生改变,变成了修饰最邻近的rooms而不是structures,rooms被马路连接不符合题目原意和逻辑表达;each同位语从句用过去完成时同样没有必要性.

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tiffanykid 2015-10-11 16:56:56

1) 一个完整的句子之中只能有一个谓语动词,两个谓语动词之间必须有连词进行连接   2) each型独立主格,强调句尾名词,形式为:   句子 + 复数名词结尾, each + 介词短语/形容词短语/-ed形式/-ing形式。   例:Chinese, the most ancient of living writing systems, consists of tens of thousands of ideographic characters, each character a miniature calligraphic composition inside its own square frame.

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停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-19 11:31:44

scale of修饰不对, scale of 1 to 10只有修饰这种范围的意思。each修饰了room语义不对

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linlvyun 2016-11-19 17:38:17

it doesn't make sense to use 'each' AFTER the comma, because it's not true that each structure was connected with a road system. instead, the road system connected all of the structures with each other, which is nowhere close to the same thing. (having 'each' BEFORE the comma makes sense, because it's actually true that each of the structures comprised up to 600 rooms.) analogy: the USA comprises 50 states, each of which is united by a federal government --> wrong (the implication is that each state has its own federal government) the USA comprises 50 states, all of which are united by a federal government --> correct the USA comprises 50 states, (all) united by a federal government --> correct, whether you have 'all' or not

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Monicca 2016-11-14 15:40:00

原文时态不应随便进行改变原则;给出的答案中如果时态没有理由的进行了改变,即改变了原句 要表达的时间关系,则错。 原句句意不应随便进行改变原则

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gogogoLei 2016-08-10 10:12:51

rooms connected,且had been 没有过去的时间点作参考,时态错误

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梅干菜要和gmat分手 2016-08-02 09:25:17

- it doesn't make sense to use 'each' AFTER the comma, because it's not true that each structure was connected with a road system. instead, the road system connected all of the structures with each other, which is nowhere close to the same thing. (having 'each' BEFORE the comma makes sense, because it's actually true that each of the structures comprised up to 600 rooms.

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snow199511 2016-06-27 18:59:38

each had been 时态不对;each 去掉定语从句就只剩each了,做同位语么,而且rooms用马路连接,也不太合适。

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IAMBACK 2016-05-29 11:53:40

with结构修饰built,而of结构修饰的是scale

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Egoyiyy 2016-03-11 15:21:51

CDE, 房间被马路连接, 句意错误,排除

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ypheroin 2015-12-22 19:21:50

1. A,B选项中的with 改成 of后,改变了修饰的名词:with 修饰的是built,built on sth with…,改成of后,即变成了修饰scale; 2. of插入语并入句子后,each指代rooms,每个房间被道路连接,这个说不通 3. each that had been,过去完成时,没必要。

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