The Anasazi settlements at Chaco Canyon were built on a spectacular scale with more than 75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms each, connected by a complex regional system of roads.
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vickiaro 2015-10-28 10:22:15
1）因为with前面无逗号，所以其修饰的是紧接名词scale。 2）“of up to 600 rooms each”是插入语，修饰structure。each指代structure，即表示每个structure有600个房间。 3）connected逻辑上是紧接structures的，做后置定语修饰structure。 4）正确的句子应该表达清楚以下三个意思：The Anasazi settlement建筑有很大的规模，为75栋建筑物，每栋建筑物有600个房间，这些建筑物由复杂的地域交通道路所连接。
seline_lover 2015-10-29 12:20:45
of up to 600 rooms each是插入语，修饰structures，正常语序应该为：each of the structures has up to 600 rooms。
martinachoi 2015-12-16 17:09:14
with修饰built。of up to 600 rooms each是插入语，修饰structures，正常语序应该为：each of the structures has up to 600 rooms。 句子结构：Anasazi settlements were built… with ….structures (of …) connected by… 插入成分of up to 600 rooms each，each指代structure，表示每个structure有600个房间，connected 修饰对象也为structures. 正确的句子应该表达清楚以下三个意思:The Anasazi settlement建筑规模很大，有75栋建筑 每栋建筑有600个房间 这些建筑由复杂的地域交通道路所连接
tiatao 2017-01-02 10:49:53
more than 75 carefully engineered structures 应修built, 根据句意， 即超过75个精细的工程建筑。因此使用with修饰。 of up to 600 rooms each, 作为插入语修饰structures( each). connected by a complex regional system of roads修饰structure。
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-19 11:40:09
"with" can also be used to introduce a component or feature of something. for instance, if i am looking to buy "a car with air-conditioning", then the air-conditioning is a feature of the car (i.e., i am clearly not looking to buy a car and also a separate air-conditioner). you can also use "with" to modify the previous verb/clause (e.g., All of our cars come with air-conditioning). this is what's happening here.
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-19 11:38:18
generally, when you have comma + prep phrase, that modifier should describe the whole idea of the clause that precedes it. i.e., it's describing the notion that punjab is the richest state, not just describing the state itself. as another example, if you had the following sentence -- punjab is india's richest state, with an area of xxxxx square miles -- it would be incorrect, because the modifier doesn't have anything to do with punjab's status as india's richest state. (if the modifier just had to describe the state itself, it would technically be fine.) if there's a comma, the modifier should describe the entire preceding clause. if there isn't one, it should describe only the noun or action that precedes it. in the latter case, you may have to use common sense to decide whether the modifier describes a noun or an action. for instance, i read the book on the subway --> here, "on the subway" describes the action of reading the book, not the book itself. i read the book on the table --> here, "on the table" describes the book.
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-19 11:34:42
structure后面的两个修饰语可能同时修饰structre也一个修饰structure后者rooms具体看语义
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-19 11:10:52
插入语删掉后connected 修饰structures.语义正确
又是羊 2016-11-24 03:18:22
of up to 600 rooms each是个插入语，修饰structure
linlvyun 2016-11-19 17:31:45
of up to 600 rooms each 是插入语
励志yy 2016-11-06 15:19:14
理清built，scale，structures，rooms还有connected的关系： structures不是修饰scale的（用of错在此），而是修饰built的，因此用with；rooms 修饰structures，而rooms不会由roads connected，因此connected应该指的是structure。 B中of up to 600 rooms each 为插入语，且含倒装。调整顺序后为独立主格：each of structures has up to 600 rooms.
Morgan6666 2016-10-15 10:10:55
it uses a nonessential modifier set off by commas ('of up to 600 rooms each'), which, if eliminated, yields the intact and legitimate sentence ...carefully engineered structures, connected by... (with another nonessential modifier).
yaomaczhang 2016-09-13 04:03:06
of up to 6000 rooms each, 插入语，修饰structure。connected修饰structure
