Siberia's Lake Baikal, with more than 300 rivers draining into it, it holds more of the world's fresh water than all that of the North American Great Lakes combined, 20 percent.
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Garrett 2014-08-15 14:32:50
Lake Baikal,..., it holds - it多余
snow199511 2016-06-23 20:41:22
Siberia's Lake Baikal......, it holds
cantebury 2015-09-23 18:12:38
主语为siberial lake baikal, 后面又有it做主语，it 多余
安安1224 2016-11-21 23:12:45
句子结构不对
love刘小宅 2016-02-22 19:23:03
it多余
love刘小宅 2016-02-22 19:03:38
it 是wordy了
grace麦子1 2015-11-16 22:00:44
Lake B, it holds -- S, SV..多主语；20 percent 不知道是修饰什么
yy1646 2015-10-30 12:58:54
Siberia's Lake Baikal, it holds 主语重复
jessie_yanhui 2015-09-03 09:01:52
Siberia's Lake Baikal和it重复
rainy2014 2014-09-10 11:21:07
it多余
