语法 Sentence Correction-2930

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When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.

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zi小白白白 2015-07-20 09:22:59

she included in it a call for female enfranchisement 。。。。倒装了。。she included a call for female enfranchisement in it 。。。。倒装之后it更接近Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention。。它的指代对象

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Cherry00721 2014-06-27 10:36:16

考点:句子结构(Grammatical Construction)、逻辑表达(Logical Predication)   1) 修饰成分应该尽量靠近修饰对象   2) 逗号+ -ed形容词的结构中, -ed形容词从语法上修饰的是逗号前最后一个名词   3) 分词短语在句首起状语作用,逻辑主语等于句子主语

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Leon111 2014-07-07 20:24:23

正确, when连接完整的句子,that从句紧靠修饰对象,句子结构清晰,用词简洁

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停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-18 19:04:57

尽量不要先以that这个修饰是否为限定性修饰为decision point吧

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snow199511 2016-06-23 20:27:23

倒装:she included in it a call for female enfranchisement = she included a call for female enfranchisement in it

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xx2312345X 2016-06-14 18:09:30

C有两点不如E 1.主动优于被动 2.过去完成时无根据

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玛莎基 2016-03-21 09:01:47

这种整句都要改的题目,先找出主谓宾,理清句子结构。 而且GMAT考试中主动语态优于被动语态。 关于she included in it a call for female enfranchisement 。。。。 这句话倒装了。。she included a call for female enfranchisement in it 。。。。倒装之后it更接近Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention。。它的指代对象

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眞白 2016-03-20 14:24:35

反思:句子长,选项长,时间不够,也不够细心。再做一遍又能做对。

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小瓜瓜 2016-02-24 11:12:26

主动优于被动

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wangcanhui 2016-02-15 22:40:46

When连词,连接了完整的句子,include发出者明确 使用主动形式。

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rosyonly 2015-11-27 16:30:21

考点; 1. LP 排除 ABC 2. fragment排除D,无谓语

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seline_lover 2015-10-28 16:06:27

正确, when连接完整的句子,that从句紧靠修饰对象,句子结构清晰,用词简洁

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vickiaro 2015-10-27 09:19:46

she included in it a call for female enfranchisement. 是进行了倒装,即 she included a call for female enfranchisement in it.

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