语法 Sentence Correction-2928

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When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it.

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martinachoi 2015-12-15 13:33:13

that choice uses a "when" modifier, implying that the action described in the main clause was simultaneous with the action described in the modifier. since that's the case, the tense switch is illogical. see: when i arrived at home, smoke was billowing from the oven.

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snow199511 2016-06-23 20:25:30

WHEN + (Simple Tense) 表同时发生 HAD BEEN错误

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Phillis 2014-07-04 18:03:42

主动优于被动。

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停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-18 19:05:35

when本来就代表两件事情同时发生,这时候用过去完成时前后矛盾

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Monicca 2016-11-13 20:51:25

it指代模糊,it太靠后

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sasazz 2016-11-07 15:53:56

when表示的是当...的时候,暗示两个事情同时发生 that choice uses a "when" modifier, implying that the action described in the main clause was simultaneous with the action described in the modifier. since that's the case, the tense switch is illogical. see: when i arrived at home, smoke was billowing from the oven.

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bonbonusagi 2016-09-13 00:24:23

后半句的被动语态没有显示出动作的是动作的施动者 并且原文没有时间标志显示需要使用过去完成式

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huiminzi1124 2016-06-10 12:44:19

had been施动者模糊 it有歧义

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Sparrow_7 2016-03-14 21:19:48

与E相比,主动由于被动;had been不对

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love刘小宅 2016-02-22 15:15:59

had been 时态不正确,变成在起草之前就是

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wangcanhui 2016-02-15 22:39:17

句子中心改变。adopted只是修饰,而该选项中变为了主干成分。 并且主句akward, 过去完成时也不恰当。

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hxq1994 2016-01-03 23:50:38

句子结构正确 主谓 --对比E 选项 主句主语不同--主从呼应原则 动词 had 过完敏感 没有绝对hint

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