语法 Sentence Correction-2848

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According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's father, and giants.

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Cheriez 2015-09-03 06:42:16

Both OPENERS are fine ('According to...' and '...indicate that...'), so that split is a red herring. The problem with C, though, is the last part of the answer choice: 'that they used to dress.' All this means FOR SURE is that the robe was just a tool that the women used in the process of dressing the statue (maybe they used it to zip up the back of the statue's dress...??). Choice D, on the other hand, correctly conveys the idea that the women actually put the dress ON the statue.

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shisu0610041 2015-05-15 18:12:46

young Athenian women作为According to…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑; 应该是“考古学家”according to 未划线部分的and that从语法上跟that they used…平行,共同修饰a new woolen robe, 不符合逻辑

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Cheriez 2015-08-18 04:10:23

C is not parallel , if you remove the first part after first 'that' and substitute the second part of sentence after second'that', u will see it does not make sense

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Gytha 2017-01-16 15:26:15

young Athenian women作为according to 的逻辑主语不通

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tiatao 2016-12-31 05:27:54

根据未划线部分, “and that this robe depicted ....", 划线部分应有与之对应平行的成分。从句意理解, 该从句应为宾语从句, 找带有宾语从句的选项。 且according to records or based on records, 后应接逻辑主语, Yong Athenia women 不是正确的逻辑主语。

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小揪揪 2016-12-09 10:52:06

平行问题错我,according to 和主语没有错

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Port1a 2016-12-07 20:48:09

robe that they和未划线部分的that this robe并列 错

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Port1a 2016-12-07 20:48:05

robe that they和未划线部分的that this robe并列 错

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莉莉安700 2016-10-12 08:37:41

indicate that和 and that 平行,and是平行标志

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languagehacker 2016-09-05 21:23:36

后面的taht不能平行

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snow199511 2016-06-23 09:52:09

young Athenian women作为According to…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑; 应该是“考古学家”according to 未划线部分的 robe that.....and that this robe....

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xx2312345X 2016-06-08 21:06:20

前定语从句 后同位语从句 不能平行

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Lily9927 2016-05-10 09:55:46

第一个that是定语从句;第二个that不是修饰robe的定从,所以不是平行

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