Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's father, and giants.
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grace麦子1 2015-11-15 20:18:24
与A项错误类似
钢蛋蛋蛋蛋 2014-09-16 13:11:07
had collaborated过去完成时，时态不对；and后面的that从句在前面找不到平行结构
languagehacker 2016-09-05 21:21:46
过去完成时不明，with which后面接句子
莉莉安700 2016-10-15 09:57:27
后面的andthat需要前面有相应的平行部分对应
snow199511 2016-06-23 09:50:44
1. that this robe dipicted 修饰对象没有 2. had collaborated 陈述一个过去的实事，没必要用had
Ines要上700 2016-03-04 18:33:52
'Based on' just isn't right - it doesn't convey the right meaning. It would apply to the women themselves (the following subject). The women are not based on ancient records, so that's wrong.
cantebury 2015-12-09 17:46:56
and that 无平行对象 with which 后面应该接句子，不能接to do,
qiyeran346 2014-09-28 12:34:14
unparallel without that past perfect tense is not necessary
773 2014-05-07 09:36:32
had没必要，没有强调先后顺序的事件
