Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's father, and giants.
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qiyeran346 2014-09-28 12:35:27
s-v agreement, women based on records? relative clause unparallel in meaning
773 2014-05-07 09:39:38
如果robe that....and that this robe...，就完全凌乱了。。。。。
好大一只Meow 2016-01-19 22:13:26
【parallelism】如果划线部分硬要用that-clause修饰robe, 必须同后面“ that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's father, and giants."这一同样修饰robe的从句保持结构平行，即也用完整的”主谓宾“结构。
小揪揪 2016-12-09 10:53:04
Based on' just isn't right - it doesn't convey the right meaning. It would apply to the women themselves (the following subject). The women are not based on ancient records, so that's wrong. 用based on 有歧义，可能是women
不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-10-08 12:58:15
young Athenian women作为Based on…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑
languagehacker 2016-09-05 21:20:25
两个that平行修饰robe不对
yhhzj110 2016-09-05 15:53:20
两个that并列修饰 robe 不正确 ，后面一个that 应该与前一句并列
yhhzj110 2016-09-05 15:50:23
状语的逻辑主语不正确
snow199511 2016-06-23 09:49:48
woolen robe that.....and that this robe 不平行
Egoyiyy 2016-03-08 10:04:23
如果that they used 与that this robe 平行，那么第二个that也是定语从句修饰robe，this robe就是多余的。所以这种平行不成立。
Ines要上700 2016-03-04 18:33:38
'Based on' just isn't right - it doesn't convey the right meaning. It would apply to the women themselves (the following subject). The women are not based on ancient records, so that's wrong.
ypheroin 2016-01-29 19:53:08
如果that they used 与that this robe 平行，那么第二个that也是定语从句修饰robe，this robe就是多余的。所以这种平行不成立。
